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junyortrakr
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Yes, I don't think she would have remained in mourning for too long. Undoubtedly, she would have had a difficult time with things, but she would have survived.

Alex proved once again why it is unwise to remain unforgiving of someone.
A Gentleman Of Leisure
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
Excellent quality of writing - and I'm amazed you could make anything of the story out at all when you seem to be working through a 3rd language. In my experience, translations from Japanese into Chinese, which are then translated from Chinese into English, make little or no sense.
esther
2006-04-26 . chapter 1
good work. enjoyed reading this.

sophia's story wrecks me...damned alex and his angst...such a bastard. and i totally agree that vincent was a good guy. i've often had half-written vincent x sophia fics running through my head.

they deserve a happy ending.
The Sneak
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
I liked this fic. ^_^ I just saw this anime, and felt the ending lacked closure in just a few ways; the possibility of VincentXSophia is one I like. ^_^

(The whole "characters that LOOK European but SPEAK Japanese that I READ in Chinese and then WRITE about in English" thing made me laugh. ^_^ But no, I don't think you 'missed' anything.)

Good stuff!
Rayni
2005-10-28 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. Liked "Not like Alex, who was never mindful of protocol," among other bouts of clarity. Very IC. Great job. ^_^
nomadff7
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this story very much. It was very well written, Vincent and Sophia were in character, and it was just a nice scene. Thank you for sharing it.
Yma
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
Very nice. That was excellently written with a fine handle on characterisation and atmosphere. I liked the fact you didn't force it into any sort of stilted romance or anything. And I Do agree with you about the Elizabeth thing. So yes, this is a very impressive piece. One of the best Exile fic's I've read yet. Good stuff!
saffiremoon21
2005-04-05 . chapter 1
Yay! I love your fic!!

Write some more please!!
I really like the way you portrayed Sophia.
Don't worry-this is good.
JinnanTonnyx
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
This is not half bad; it certainly ranks among the top Last Exile fics on here. Prose gets jerky here and there, but overall everything reads well.
Good job, especially, with the characters. The post-series Sophia/Vincent connection is something I (and I'm sure many other fans) would definitely be wondering about, and things seem very IC. Kudos.
Hofftailing
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
Hey, thanks for writing a little piece on Sophia. She's my favorite character of LE.

Anyways I enjoyed this fic because it takes place after the series- you don't see fics focusing on Sophia's reign. The conversation with Vincent is plausable. I liked how she's trying to balance being Queen while still retaining that level of casualness with Vincent.
Ein
2005-04-02 . chapter 1
I love this story. Unlike some fangirls, I admit that Alex would have never loved Sophitia. Sure, it would've been cute, but Alex was just too stuck on Yuris. Thanks for pointing that out. Besides, I think Sophitia and Vince look pretty cute together ;).
roguehobbit
2005-04-02 . chapter 1
Good fic. I’d like to think she will be happy too, wether that be with someone, or on her own ruling a country.
Sophia and Vince seemed very in character, so I don’t think that aspect was lost in translation. ^-^
Write more LE fics?
Milkycrownlover4
2005-03-31 . chapter 1
I would have tried to review earlier, but my computer kept saying weird things ^.^; oh well... just to let you know, i thought this story was pretty good, is this your first Last Exile work? i dunno... :goes and checks to see: i write last exile Doujinshi, so i was able to relate to your (this) fanfic becuase even though the surrounding story dosent dwell deep into the fact, in my Doujin Vincent Alzey and (Princess, Empress;) Sophia forrester do get married, even though its not realiseduntill towards the end of the series. that was why i thought this fic was good, becuase i could relate to it~! :D

... Milk-Chan~!
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