Oh this was so good! One of my very favorite moments-

That was great.

My heart simply broke with this and even now the tears are fighting to escape. Thank you for sch a powerful fic, it has reminded me (not that I needed it) how much I love what you write :)

amazingly well done - a great take on a classic moment of angst

Mishy

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That was great.

Excellently written- this adds a lot of texture to the original scene which was so well done in the show itself. I think the ending, where Jack almost touches her hand then pulls back, didn't do justice to the emotions he was feeling earlier like you describe here.