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| Krysy Worthington 2006-11-26 ch 17,  | abuseits been months, update already! |
| reader-not-a-reviewer 2006-11-18 ch 17, | abuseaw fluffyness! |
| TheVampire89 2006-10-08 ch 17, | abuseLove your story! It's really good :D Please continue! :D |
| Mony 2006-09-24 ch 17, anon. | abuselove it |
| Shelby 2006-09-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseI just wanted to let you know that "seen" isn't the past tense of the verb "See" unless you put Have in front of it... Instead of "I seen" it would be "I saw" but you could put she had seen or I have seen.. Nothing like a good enlgish lesson eh? haha |
| Ducks 2006-09-17 ch 17, anon. | abuseNext Chapter Please |
| sara 2006-09-17 ch 17, anon. | abuseyou keep saying stupid hormones. i really hope buffy isn't pregnant. i know it's too soon for that, but it would be parker's and i really wouldn't want her to get pregnant by that jerk. do you have a beta for this story? if not i would suggest it, there's a lot of mistakes and they can be kinda distracting. anyway, i'm glad buffy didn't get with riley. i'm hoping we will finally get to the spuffy soon. |
| Ceel 2006-09-17 ch 17, anon. | abusethat was very cute! i love how you made things work out between them, can't wait for the next update ! |
| EMBER91 2006-09-16 ch 17, | abuseGOOD! Please more! |
| Ceel 2006-09-16 ch 16, anon. | abusehey! this story is great, i love the plot!!i hoped that on the last chapter things wouldn't get too fluggy and they didn'(, so i was really glad! now i dont think Riley and Buffy should get together, but have a pretty dense history and him being protective in a big brother kinda way would be good too...but dont change your way on acount of me!! whatever you come up with, please update soon!! |
| lacey 2006-09-16 ch 16, anon. | abuseokay, you know, if buffy and riley get together, then i have my doubts that this is ever going to be a spuffy story, but i don't think i care to stick around anymore. this just isn't spuffy to me and you're a little too into torturing your readers, i think i'll look elsewhere. |
| ONIX-21 2006-09-04 ch 15, | abuseI really like ur story so far and hope you update soon !! gotta say i like the second option about how Buffy reacts to the kiss where she kisses Spike bk but he stops it and gives a sweet speech !! but it is ur story and im sure wat ever u do will b great! |
| eakipps 2006-08-26 ch 15, | abuse#2, but buffy won't be happy that he stopped them |
| EMBER91 2006-08-21 ch 15, | abuseHey, I tried to review for the last chapter, but the stupid module wouldn't let me. Anyway, you're back! I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Nice chapter, and I can't decide whether or not to pick number one or two, I just dunno! I laughed when Buffy hit Parker, stupid idiot deserved it. This is an awesome story and I can't wait until you update again. As for the person who flamed you, you're right! If you don't like it, DON'T READ IT! You can also delete Anon. Reviews. Which I find to come in handy when you don't want to deal with people like that. Rock on! ~ Ember |
| willow-wiccan 2006-08-21 ch 15, | abusei LOVE this story! didn't used to like whole AU-all-human stuff that much, but u have changed my mind. as to continuing, i don't got a clue. my advice would be to think about how each would pan out then choose ur fave! x |