I am afraid there is an error regarding Sakura and Kyuubi's use of the word 'slut'. Though out this entire chapter the only word Kyuubi has referred to Sakura as is 'bitch', and he uses it three times before the comment: "Well, at least she'd definitely graduated from slut."

I'm only mentioning it because it rather tripped me badly when I read it and sent me off going, "Now where did he ever refer to her as that when not talking to Naruto??"

So... Yeah. Could you omit that sentence or change it? Pretty please?

Other than that; Awesome story~! It looked a bit intriguing when I noticed the prequel to this in... ah yes, Sophie3's favorites. I went: "Hmm??! Threesome? Yay!" and opened it in a tab. Kinda ditched A Grimm's Promise half way through to read this, actually. I will definitely be looking forward to seeing the next chapter~~

^^~ and... YAY! Sakura is AWESOME.

...Kay. I'm gone. *waves*

Shit, this needs to get updated. And for someone who hates writing fight scenes you sure do a bang-up job of it.

I have a feeling that the dinner scene is going to be a heated one.

C.D.

It was alright. I liked it.

C.D.

Not bad. They're the same old Team seven but more mellow. Much more mellow.

C.D.

Loving the second part of this fic.

C.D.

Hello training.

Annoying little brats.

He was really quite glad today wouldn't be the day he lost one of them.

That line is so Kakashi. Great work.

The ending was so cute & hot at the same time.

Kakashi should teach his students the Bullshit No Jutsu.

Great work.

Sakura interrupted the relative quiet of their lunch break -- which he was using to train a little more; his taijutsu was getting rusty -- and announced, "My father wants to invite you two to dinner."

She waited two weeks to tell them that. Great work.
Why can't they move in another house in the Uchiha district?
See ya later.

Your fan

Itachi aprntice.

Great work. I like to see more Team 7 fluff. Do you know any more authors of the team 7 genre.

Great work.

Great work. Go Naruto, grope her and Him.