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George of Dragons 6/29/07 . chapter 3
this is insane,and i love it.
fish stix satay 7/16/05 . chapter 3
that chapter was... interesting.klaus and fiona seemed... to be having fun. who is fiona anyway? i havent read the 11th book yet because i cant be bothered going out to the shops to buy a copy. dont forget to leave me an arm to burn! Fish_Stix_Satay _
fish stix satay 7/16/05 . chapter 2
YAY! carmelita fainted! that has taken so long to happen.
fish stix satay 7/16/05 . chapter 1
that was so good. i liked the baseballbat bit. i also like your review for my artemis fowl fanfic. dont know if you've read the original as i cant check that email address where i am right now but its under the pen name "pink flamingo girl". i know, lame name, but i wanted to think of something quick.

back to the review - i like the fic, write more soon.

ps. could you maybe leave an arm or a leg of whoever complained about my fic for me to unceremoniously burn?
SweetZi 6/23/05 . chapter 3
Hey, I up dated 'Replacements'!

Nice story by the way!

Its cools keep up the good work! P
Sugary Snicket 6/16/05 . chapter 3
Actually, Fiona dumped Klaus.
Sugary Snicket 6/16/05 . chapter 1
Nice job.
hook-handed girl 4/30/05 . chapter 2
you shoulda broght the hook-handed man inctead of fiona. she'll see a mushroom and drop her gun to go hug it...
hook-handed girl 4/30/05 . chapter 1
why is there dead ppl and no hook-handed man!
chitoryu12 4/16/05 . chapter 1
Excuse me, mister usuck, I would recommend that next time you review to add some mature reasons why this sucks. And BTW, that was only the first chapter, which I wrote LAST YEAR! I got better this year, so read the rest of the fic before reviewing.
ChoFrog09 4/8/05 . chapter 1
This is for other chapters: HOW DARE U TREAT ISADORA IN THIS MANNER! NO! Fiona is a traitor! KLAUS NOW HATES HER! IT EVEN SAID SO! okay, I'll shut up.
ChoFrog09 4/8/05 . chapter 3
Well...um...what can I say that's won't contain swearing? Hm...AH HA! IT'S FAIR! YAY! I THOUGHT OF SOMETHING!
ChoFrog09 4/8/05 . chapter 2
I think the teams really SHOULS be the TEAM 1:Quagmires and the Baudelaires TEAM 2: Everyone else. This is...well...how do I say this? Um...refer to the anonymous author usuck's review.
usuck 4/8/05 . chapter 1
OMG this sucks
Laugh if you wish 4/8/05 . chapter 3
HAHAHAHA! That was funny! Good job!
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