I really liked the dialogue during this chapter. It fit in perfectly with the canon characters. I’m really looking forward to reading more in this series. So hurry up!

i enjoyed yuor fight scene in this chapter, adn i really liked the idea behind it. smart move on faiths part to start a fight to get the barrier dropped. looking forward to reading more.

Sorry i didnt' revie was kinda busy with school. It is great so far. I hope someone finds them.

Ud soon

This chapter was great. I noticed a lot more detail and it really improved your story! I liked the detail on Hope’s injuries, it made it seem more real, and I loved everyone’s reactions to her state. Also I’m glad the scoobies have an idea on what is happening. Can’t wait for more.

I like your fic. I am also very happy you got rid of this Robin Wood and gave Faith Xander. I also hope for a nice Xander/Spike scene.

I like your story, and I see a defiant improvement as the chapters progresses. My only suggestion would be, be slightly more descriptive. I mean your fight scene was really good, but if you had described the demons a little more, and used more terms like right hook, roundhouse, sidekick, things like that, you would have painted an even more detailed and realistic scene. But it’s really good, and I am really looking forward to finding out more about Hope, and seeing the relationship between Xander and Faith progress.

Hey, great update. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Hey, i love your story! I can't wait for the next update!

I read the other one to catch up. I like this so far.

Ud soon