 GSYH 11/7/03 . chapter 1A good read. The circumstances of this fic, while humourous, is still realistic in the GW universe, and the characters are in character, good job.
I like how you did the humour, it's not out of its way overdone, but a mature air the quailty of a bunch a grown women having conversations while fixing their lipstick in front of the bathroom mirror. I meant that in a good way, ladies's room conversations are always amusing and informative, it's during one of them I learned a new way of twisting up my hair. Female bonding.
Catherine and Rashid is a strange idea, but I can see it happening the way you portraited it. And Rashid would do it the old fashion way. |
 Lothar 12/26/02 . chapter 1Scary snake, sappy 3X4 goodness, girlie fun. I would call this a good benchmark for short comedy fics. _ |
 Ysabet 9/30/01 . chapter 1Oh my gods, that was funny! Thank you... I'm in major GW-mode right now (gonna do a second Yami No Matsuei/GW crossover fic, bizarre ne?) and I'm reading tons of GW stuff- but this has got to be the best I've read today! Mucho thankees, and I can see how it won a fic contest! (Doesn't it feel GREAT when that happens?) |
 Nova of Mink 7/7/01 . chapter 1LOL, that was cute. |
 Catwho 6/27/01 . chapter 1Actually, yes. There is a hentai 1X2 spinoff to this called "Retrospect." It starts Izzy, the dead iguana . . . and it's actually a Relena and Hilde POC fic. Yes, I'm sick. o_O |
 Wing 6/27/01 . chapter 1 That as Hilarious!...Dorothy...I knew she was fishy! Anyway, is there more? or the end? |
 Shinigami-chan 5/17/01 . chapter 1loved it |
 Ezekiel Klitiras 5/16/01 . chapter 1That was good. I like it. |
 SharonToggle 4/11/01 . chapter 1LOL! That's really funny! Good job! Nice Fic! |
 may 4/2/01 . chapter 1 Totally loved this fic! Dorothy is really a wiz so she is so much in character! Hope you will make more! |
 Phelan 3/21/01 . chapter 1Oh, who would've thought that twigbrows would be such a prankster? Hey Duo, someone's trying to take your title as the Grand Prankster! ::Duo runs in:: "Huh, who?" "Would you believe me If I told you it was Dorothy?" "NOOO! KISAMAAA!" ::Duo drags a startled Wufei in, reches behind him and pulls out the katana from hammerspace:: "I hate to quote Wuffie, but... INJUSTICE!" "Well, I gotta say I liked it. I hope you write one about Dorothy getting Catherine. BWAHAHAHA! |
 superembarrassed 3/20/01 . chapter 1That was funny! _ |
 marle 3/19/01 . chapter 1 hilarious fic! with all the right couples. |
 Euterpe1014 3/18/01 . chapter 1wow, i really have to check out more of your fics- they have just the right amount of humor in them to make them enjoyable without being too silly...i like what you did with dorothy's character- in my book, it's ok to make her the villian as long as it's all in good fun...and i'm glad you didn't try to force quatre and trowa together with anyone else- it just wouldn't make any sense...congratulations! you're getting me to read non-yaoi (or semi-non-yaoi) and enjoy it! |