hey, nice story!! you should really update, lots of fans would be really happy!!

Interesting so far.

good story, love it. update soon

Please continue. I want to read what happens next.

hey! That was really good! Why'd you stop?

NO! i read in you other story that you were gonna delete this! PLEASE DONT I LOVE IT TOO MUCH! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

WO!AWSOME!

nonsense i thought it was very good

wait...i'm a new reader...you said this was going to be a long fic, right? Please keep going...this is just starting to get to the REALLY good parts!

I love this story, and I can't wait for you to put the next chapter up.

Someone recommended this story to me and I didn't check it out until now. First of all, I must say that the summary is very intriguing. That's probably what got me willing to read it (usually I'm a picky reader). I think the story line is somewhat original and it got me to read up on scribes during Ancient Egypt. One particular book said that women could also have been scribes but it's not that clear. Anyway, I think that your writing style is pretty good. Romi's attitute matches Bakura's which is what I liked about the coupling and she's like the strong independent girl that people like. The fact that she used Siuani wasn't that cool though but at the same time I kind of liked that she is selfish. Um...what else? The fact that Romi wants to get revenge on Atemu b/c of what happened to her home which is the same as Bakura's goal is what I really liked. Sorry, it's been a while since I've given reviews so I'm trying to say stupid things in this review. Just wanted to give you at least one review since you reviewed my story a lot. btw, just so you know, Aishiteru, Malik-sama is finally updated. I'm gonna go read the rest of your story bye.

omg this story is awsome it's so intense and full of sadness it's really good i really hope u update soon i want to read more i want to know what happens next and i also want to know how romi and bakura come together probably to help eachother kill the pharoh poor yami is in for a surprise well anyway plez update soon i can't wait ! ^_^
Merika

i like the beginning of the story so far really awsome i know i have'nt read all the chapters yet but it's getting late and i'll finish tommorow but so far it's really awsome. i can't wait for more chapters i know they'll be good comeing from u *cuz i read ur other story and all* but ya i hope u update urequited luv soon to and this story as well ! ^_^
Merika

Please update, it is really interesting. I really wish that you could update this as soon as possible. Thanks

:Aki:

Oh, so she is from Kuruelna too! I think you spelt it wrong, but anyways,who would want to give you a nasty review. your stories are great