T-T b-but...i like chocolate! i wanted that chocolate bar...with it's chocolatey goodness! *giggle* update soon !

wow! your story is so cool! i love OC fics rather than the original pairings in the show. i wanna better improve my story, please read it, it's called Queen of Thieves, then send me your reply.

Thanks, once again. and oh, please update!

Hey Josephine, these last three chapters were awesome! I don't think this story is boring at all either. I've never seen the anime so this is all new to me as well and I think you're doing a great job on making it seem just so real. Anyways, Baal was such a jerk in the last chapter! I can't believe he changed the essay to something like that. Romi shouldn't have gotten whipped for what he did! Okay, now I'm rambling there. lol

Anyways, I loved that one line were you said, "It looked like it would kill whoever swallowed it, so that meant it had to be healthy." lol. That's so true.

I'm also glad that Bakura is in this a lot more as well. I can't believe he poisened the pharoah though. That was really cruel of him.

Btw, sorry for the long review here. I just felt like I should leave something longer now since I haven't reviewed to you during the last two chapters.

Well, anyways, please update whenever you get the chance.

Goodbye.

good chapter :)

Hey, I haven't been able to review on your other quizzes due to the gayness of mac computers, but your series is awesome! It's quite interesting and original! I hope you update ASAP

Manoke

OMG! THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED AWSOME!

That was so cool ! No i don't hate ya, for hurtin Romi and oh yah, did i mention that each chapter is better than the last? this is a really good story! i wonder if my story is like that and well g2g

Update soon!

Aww, poor Romi! Then again, what can a person expect? It can't be THAT easy to escape from a place like the pharaoh's palace or whatever it's called *sweatdrops* A brief meeting and quite the interesting one! Bakura dislikes her as much as she does him.. Neh, it'll be interesting to see how they get to liking each other.. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next. So, the poor pharaoh's been murdered, eh? *huggles him* Well, either way, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat in suspense ;)

Aww! Poor Romi! I hope she get's better! I wonder what Bakura's going to do to Romi when he see her again? Update asap!

Oh... Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Hugs,

Kuramas Girl Angel

nahh. it's kharma. the selfish get their reward. *nod* yes, i sound like an old bird, don't i? *grabs a cane and hobbles around the room for Jo* see? lol. i liked Bakura's little revenge scene there. the bit about already breaking into the tomb was amusing. keep it up champ!

that wuz kewl! i thought you did a great job! i can't wait for the next chapter!

o.o Cool chapter *huggles Romi* ;_; damn that Baal he shalst die. although its gonna be REAL hell when she goes home ._.Great chappie . please continue! kukuku!

(smiles) Great story is really fun to read.

Blade(-)

-_- Stupid Baal. Sorry, I haven't been Bakura sounds good, you write him really what I can tell.(hasn't seen AE eps)I'm really glad you started this fic.

Awesome chapter. It's getting really good. Update asap!