u seriously have got to update this. *death glare* oops, sorry heero _

this fic is soooo interesting! I love all the plot twists, and I'd like to see you finsih this sometime...)

luvvies, KaT aka Mistress Shinigami

First, the nitpicky stuff. You realize that when Forwa landed on the colonies, the scientists would have never approached her directly - what if she had a contagious disease? Neil Armstrong et al. were never touched for the first 3 weeks they were back on earth for a reason, and that was the freaking, dry-ass uninhabited moon. Also, even for Duo and Hilde, their taking Forwa "out on the town" doesn't seem too likely. Great plot device, but not that believable in retrospect, given the overwhelming security concerns. Not even considering that, if I were a waiter and saw people with muave skin and 4 joints on their fingers, even if they were in the latest fashions, I would calmly look at them, and then scream, "Holy f-king s-t! They have muave skin and 4 joints on their fingers! Yearrrrrrrrgh!"

Granted, I didn't even *get* to my "they finally get together" scene in Quantum Gabby, so you've done better than I have in that department. Still, this fic has *loads* of potential. But alas, your GW obsession has abated in favor of other anime frontiers, a most understandable development. Maybe you can get a ghost writer of equal ability to finish it up, if nothing else than to tell everyone what the Novie's "terrible secret" is, and to get Forwa and Cinch together (sappy grin). For a fic with a strong foundation, a dash of longed-for romantic interludes, political intrigue, and enough thoughtful material to make people think of imagined and often feared extraterrestrials in different ways - as human as we claim to be - I would call it a very fine unfinished read leaving anyone tasting its delights wanting more.

For the love of GOD, why are you not updating this more often? It's friggin AWESOME. And extra kudos for an essential Relena. Geez, what hasn't this fic got? Classic anticipated character interaction, subterfuge, schemeing, character introspection, and a new plot that definetely takes the story in an all new direction. You've managed to avoid rehashing the series while still remembering what series you're writing. Maybe could be polished into something more novelesque, but as a fic this stands solid. Can't wait to see what you come up with!

How cool, a new episode part! Again, I just rediscovered this story, and I'm glad that you combined the parts of the first 3 episodes and... post again soon!

another great chapter! this is so exciting!

cool chapter! waiting for more

I'm...gonna...stick with it...c'mon, write more soon...

Can't wait to read more! This is an awesome story, Cat. The characters are all very believable and 'human'. Keep up the good work!

another good chapter! yea!

Love it. please continue.

very nice action between Quatre and Trowa! Good chapter! waiting for the next one.

keep going. Wouldn't they incubate Forwa for health purposes? What if she carried a nasty virus? Oh well, the author has control! Buyt you may want to mention why she wasn't detained (as well as the other pilots) for being on an alien vessel full of alien bacteria and viruses.

as usual another great chapter! keep up the good work...

OoOOOOOOO! I like this story!