Very impressive, well-written and well planned. I look forewards to the sequel. Good luck with your parish: I know what it's like. My home parish, St. Anne's of Campobello, got downgraded to a mission five years ago, and the church is literally falling down around our collective ears. May yours not suffer its possible fate.

real quickly, how old is nat
any ways, its really cool i guess

i liked it. i only have one pet peev - his lighter. the lighter has to be with him if you're placing it in the timeframe before the movie.

bah, stupid boy. how does he know what john did?everybody was outside. no wonder natalie's mad at him. at least he deported mefistofel back to hell. lu's gonna be mad.

funny you should mention Johnny Mnemonic since i just watched it tonight on TV. whe. anyways, i'm enjoying it. only two chapters left.

you know, i wasn't sure at first whether i was right about my hunch, but now i know i am. this is taking place before the movie, isn't it? because he's still coughing and beeman's still alive. that's okay though, it just means that a couple of things i thought might be possible won't happen.

Awesome! Couldn't take my eyes off the text. I can't wait for the sequel!

Way to go. Good as usual, and I can't WAIT for the sequel! Looks amazing!

i like it but in the movie he cussed alot more with amount of different words. i like it, different.

Great job. I love this story, have been following it. I can't wait to see what happens next!

BTW, so many people fall out of character with the poeple in their stories. I myself am guilty. You do a wonderful job with Constantine.

Very cool, enjoying this. Well written.

*waves* Puck here in a different screenname. I'm loving the twists and turns you're giving this story. Very nicely done.

ACE!
Please update soon.

Wow - i love it - once again, please continue!

Interesting, the description of the tiles (both shape and color) sounds like a Pennsylvania Dutch Hex Symbol designed for protection. fascinating...sorry, major geek moment there. Anyhow, loving the story, please keep with the updates!