Aw! This was an incredible sweet short story! I loved it.

nice work! short and sweet :3

i like your writing style, not too simple and not to complex. easy to understand and easy to like. keep up the good work. do you think that if the other seishi were reincarnated, they would have phobias of what killed them in their previous life? Xp

anyway, i really liked your idea and how you executed it. good job.

I read this a while ago, but it came back to mind when I was freaking out about the needle for my flu shot last night. x_x So kudos on a memorable story!

I love how you kept how mature Chiriko is, though frightened. I wanted to cheer him on the whole time I read it. _ I also enjoyed the relationship he had with his new mother- it's great to see good, active parents in anime! Also, the last line was classic. XD

Aww, poor Chiriko. ;_; Very appropriate summary there.

i'd be afraid too, had i been killed by a gigantic spinning needle.

XD I know how ya fell, Chiriko! LOL. I have a huge fear of shots, and I envy him for overcoming his... especially after dying on one. O_O

I liked this story, and think there needs to be more Chiriko fanfiction. _

Ja! Good Work!