thatm was an interesting twist but its not nc-17 maybe pg 13 or r .

i'm surprized, most slashs are reaaaalllly disgusting. and this had its weird parts, but for the most part it was pretty good.

Hey this was the best! Cool! Keep writing!

definatly...interesting. but I think it might be only an R x.x

*snif snif* More? Please?

Something... new, something different, and interesting. Not bad...