 jennifer 3/20/01 . chapter 1 thatm was an interesting twist but its not nc-17 maybe pg 13 or r . |
 Jung 3/19/01 . chapter 1 i'm surprized, most slashs are reaaaalllly disgusting. and this had its weird parts, but for the most part it was pretty good. |
 kari89 3/19/01 . chapter 1Hey this was the best! Cool! Keep writing! |
 Waku-chan 3/19/01 . chapter 1definatly...interesting. but I think it might be only an R x.x |
 Jaelawyn Noble 3/19/01 . chapter 1*snif snif* More? Please? |
 animalrae101 3/19/01 . chapter 1Something... new, something different, and interesting. Not bad... |