That... was... EXCELLENT! Descriptive, dramatic, touching; all in all, a five star fanfiction... MT

A beautifully insightful fanfiction... great job

What can I say...You have captured the essence of Aang and his relationship with Katara and Sokka. Excellent job.

Thank you! I've been waiting to read something like this for a very long time.

Very interesting. i liked it. i'll be looking out for more stories by u!

This was a great story! Lots of FANTASTIC DESCRIPTION.. So good that, right now, you are putting a bunch of pressure on me to make my review descriptive and nice. You had alot of literary terms, you especially had a lot of similies. When you write I can really feel that Aang would be thinking that. You take on the part of Aang well. You should DEFINATELY think about becoming an author.In case you might want to know, I am in the seventh grade. Just want you to know if this is coming from a high schooler or from someone like a third grader. AMAZING story, bye!

Nice introspective fic. That was a powerful episode and I'm glad to see someone expand on it.

Ohh that's so sweet! I loved your elaboration on that brief ending scene! Faved

I love it. It is very sweet, and i know alot of people can related to it. I know i can.

omg. that was beautiful. keep wrighting like that. good to know some peeps still like avatar

This was so incredible that I just had to review. But now that I have I can't think of anything to say...

I especially loved the last line. Props to you!!

Brovo! Brovo! Another fantastic story! I love it! Keep on writeing these! They`re great!I look forward to the next one!*

not sure how long ago this was written, but It's very well done. Good work

Ohh how sad! You probably portrayed Aang's feelings very well, because that's probably what he was thinking as he flew away from the Southern Air Temple- the ending was very sweet. Good job.
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Your work is simply wonderful. Everything is so descriptive, and makes perfect sense. Great work.