That was... absolutely adorable. I loved it so much, especially despite the fact that it was shounen-ai, it was still in character. Excellently done.

Aw.

such cuteness...*squeal* this pairin is so adorable! good job-this is really well written!

ooh the fluff...I LOVE the fluff! praise be to you and the fluff!

aw that was so very cute i loved it tons

That was adorable! It was the sweetest thing I've ever read! ... Now if you excuse me, I have to go get my cavaties filled... (Rai: No more sweets for you! Me: Demo-! Rai: No buts! Me: But I'll die! Read the fic! Then tell me I did wrong! Rai: ...wow... see what you mean...)

-Ran Ishikawa (GAWD! I have no life!)

*wipes tear from eye* They make such a beautiful couple! *sniff* Wonderful story! *sniff*

Aw... How sweet... I really loved it, your writing is really great, and you should keep at it. -

**Alliemon

Hee hee... Drunk... Maybe all that time in the series, he was just drunk when he was angsty! Heeheeheehee...

P.S. Technically, at the end, he said his wish! So maybe Ken's gonna... Er... FORGET IT!

CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE!

I Loved It, It was so Adorable!

Keep Writting Please!

Soooooo Sweet! I loved it! You write good Sap. HAIL THE FLUFFYNESS! _ *goes to brush her teeth*

Absolutely lovely. _

Beautiful,absolutly beautiful. I cryed it was such a great story. You made it seem like it acctualy happened in real life. I read it once before when I first came to FF.net and I forgot the title of it! But now I found it again and I am happy! _

I loved it the whole thing was great i espicially liked the part when Ken proposed. ) I also liked when Davis got a lil tipsy. P This is a must read! I was ready to cry because it was sooo beautiful! I love these kind of fics, there should be more! So read this and read any others like it, they're great!

That was simply the sweetest Kensuke-fluff fic I have ever read _ It was unashamedly beautiful. You are very very talented! Keep it up