Gr! Daughter of **! I hope she'll rot in prison to death!
Kenobi's Knights, great idea. These guys deserved for the same laws like women, even if they shorter and weaker. They'll be tall and strongwilled, if someone give them a chance.
Some padawan gave it.
Every woman's feelings/lust to Obi Wan. Qui Gon's care and fatherly love. Mace Windu and action with padawan Chin, he he he.
Every Jedi Councillor's feelings/faith/support to Obi Wan. Force, had this boy some pheromones or miracle of his personality is so beautiful? I like him in Your stories. Gratulations for Supremacy, Crossing Over, New Life, Trip to Forget and Distruptions.! GREAT WORK!

You are such a good author! I think a sequel might be nice...this is like my tenth time reading this story! Please keep up the good work!

Aww, POOR OBI! But this was an excellent read. :) Nice job!

Great Story, strong themes and good charactarisations. Well done all round in my opinion, I look forward to your next one.

This story was absolutely brilliant!

Even with all of the dark themes of the story, it was so uplifting and encouraging to see how much all of Zirta's employees and all of the Masters cared for Obi-Wan so deeply. I really gained a new appreciation for Mace Windu, and the bond between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon was beautifully expressed.

I'm really excited to read the rest of your work!

-roguejedi89

p.s. I'm joining Qui-Gon in his unjedi-like thoughts about what should happen to Zirta :P

199 reviews, I thought I would make it 200.
Good job.

Poor Obi-Wan!

wow this story was so good. please write a sequel!

Wow, what a great story! I cried for what Obi-Wan was forced to go through. It was extremely well written, and you seemed to have captured the personalities of all the characters including the Aurelians. I sat down and started reading, and I couldn't quit until I finished it. If I had a bowing smilie, I'd insert it here!

That was really good.

I mean, REALLY good!

Thank you for being such a good writer.

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Wow, I was actually surprised at how good that was. Some of the characters were a little OOC at times, but the premise and execution were very well done. Congratulations on a story well written.

AWESOME STORY amber75! It was really good with the idea for the females being dominant on the planet and males being the ones treated disgracefully. It was an awesome story. So good in fact that I read your story from start to finish just now because it was soo awesome!

I reakon you should seriously consider writing a sequel with Zirta finding Obi Wan and having Flyn and maybe other characters helping him out. Btw Flyn was a great character. I reakon she was awesome!

If you dont wanna make a sequel to this then I Strongly suggest you writing more stories with Obi-Wan Kenobi/Original Character pairings.

KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!

Simon aka Simoman

From the way you ended it, with Zirta threatening Obi-wan, I get the impression that a sequel could be in the works? It may be wishful thinking on my part, but if you do, I WILL TOTALLY READ IT. I love everything you write.

I stumbled upon this the other day and have just spent the last two hours reading through it. AM enjoying it, to say the least!

Am going to be back again so I can finish the rest of it! Am looking forward to it for sure!

THAT WAS FANTASTIC! Seriously. I have no complaints. GREAT JOB!