Oh, that poor sweetheart :(

You did a beautiful job with this!

I love Gollum :D

You said that your intention was to make people feel sorry for Gollum, right? Well...you most definitely succeeded. 5 gold stars for you, and a rose as well.

- I'll be looking out for you in the future!

Sunrose Angel

I could totally hear Andy Serkis in my head! Kind of creepy, but I'm still glad that Gollum's at the bottom of Sammath Naur! LOL... I liked it though, and this is one of the actual good and not so scary poems I've read about Gollum. Keep it up!

This is good poetry. It makes me feel sorry for Gollum.

Good Job! i like it! yea you can proubly tell i am a fan of Gollum. ooh and thanks for reviwing my story Maybe it's Blasie maybe it's not ;-)

The whole time I was reading it, I could almost hear Gollum's creepy voice in my head! P Very true to the character; and it manages to evoke a certain sympathy within the reader...

I do feel sorry for Gollum! Good job!

I love it! I think it captures Gollum's despair, but twisted emotional attachment to his precious. I love it, and I love how it depicts his animosity towards the hobbits in general.

Spectacular!

Thats real good. i felt SO sorry for him...

but i think you should have mentioned something about Frodo's pity for Gollum

This is quite nice. You've got him pegged, with his strange tenacity. My only complaint is that your rhymes can be a bit awkward. I think you should experiment with non rhyming poetry more.

Great Job again! My question is how do you find the time to sit down and write like this? !Lol! Well, Good Job and see ya around the site/school soon.

You know, I really still don't feel bad for him. Great poem though!