 DeltaSilver88 2005-10-05 . chapter 2To inform you all about this, Delta Silver had four sons in the beginning, but then I decided to let him have six - Bluejolt and Nightfire are twins, Hot Shot's twin will be revealed shortly, and the last twins are revealed in the next chapters. You might know the characters already from my other story 'Amnesia'... don't kill me, please. I know it's a little stupid that [i]they[/i] are his sons, but...
In the beginning Delta was going to be a human sorcerer who had an ability to take other forms. Later I made him a true Transformer with limited psychic powers. In case you don't guess, The Fields are my name for the Afterworld. I'm not any good with romantic writing, so I'm trying to do my very best with Ironhide and Ariel's... erm... 'relationship' - if there ever will be one. |
 DarkAnimus 2005-10-05 . chapter 2 Yay, you continued! This chapter is very good, but one thing confused me: how many sons does Delta have? I counted three. A good story, no less.
An after note: Hot Shot's Childhood has been updated, just in case you didn't know yet. ;) |
 Sorcina 2005-06-28 . chapter 1cool... it's long, but I like long stories. It's happy...sad... and... PURE EVIL! One of the many reasons why I like it, but I like it for too many reasons so I'll spare you the details. Everything's good I like it very much. Thanks for sharing part of your story. I am interested to hear the rest. If you're going to finish it of course. |
 DarthAnimus 2005-06-15 . chapter 1Wow, this was ingredible! This story is really something. It rocks! I hope you continue it soon. ;) |
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