Oh no.. No, no, no. I should have not read this.. I've only read up to 107..

This isn't.. wow. So well written.

This.. is what happens right? It's the only thing happening.. so it must be the spoiler.

Omg. I spoiled myself. I so did not want that to happen.

But wow, this was very very good. Well written, and I see the heartache in her heart.

Nicely done. But.. sadly.. I don't know japanese.. and Err, can't find anymore summaries above 107..

;;..

Props,

I liked this story, the feeling of desolation and abandonment was very well expressed. My only problem was that your end was just a list of things that happened in the manga...a good deal of people don't KNOW the specifics and honestly, even if they did it's still too vague a referance. It's excusable in a fanfic but it makes your story less readable. You need to explain, not just list.