You have no idea how this drabble makes me think. Really. It's just...thought-provoking.

I love it!

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Nice work...dreams in b and w it works towards peace and clarity... followed by a vivid coloured world of happyness yet alien confusions. Nice contrast...

Words for B and W maybe monochrome, dark and light etc...

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I, too, am a drabble fan, and I loved this one. The contrast between the small momentary relief afforded him by his assassin-era b&w dreams and the more lasting peace of his current b&w dreams was very effective. I particularly liked that waking to a "vibrant, colorful world" is disappointing to him: life, even a happy life, after such a nightmare as he's known can never be free of shadows.

I'm not usually a fan of short pieces unless they're poetry, however, your piece stands in a class of its own. It is well written and has poetic element. It's short, but sweet. I believe that if it was much longer it would lose some of its value. Good job. *thumbs up* :D

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I really did like this! (The funny thing is that last night I was thinking about having a dream about perfect white snow, etc. and then red destroying the perfection. It was an idea for a fic, too!)

I didn't quite grasp what the actual meaning of the black and white versus the color meant, but I did get the nice way it contrasted between reality and Kenshin's good dreams.

Also, I don't think that you used "color" and "black and white" too much. In a fic like this, repitition can be a good thing. But I did really like the phrase "stark lights and darks." That conveyed an image more powerful than just black and white.