Wow...that was amazing. Please, this is really quite good, continue!

Not bad, not bad at all. I like it. ^_^

A seemingly simple, ordinary-enough story with a very special ending.

"That night, I dreamt of sleeping kings, and teardrop-lakes. I dreamt of tiny keys and a giant chess board. And in the center of my dream, there was a little girl, with ghost-like features, dancing in the park, right where I had seen the Cheshire cat, dancing, with little bells sewn all up her sleeves."

Yep wonderful. Excellent really.

Thats very well written, You should continue it.

wow this is very well written.a bit strange but on the other hand what isn't.hope you'll continue

YAY!! That was really weird. But you pulled it off perfectly--as usual. This story was really good. Cheshire Cat...strange. I liked it! YAY! FF9!! VIVI!! ...I'm hyper. "Go Micey Go!" says Waterman who's sitting next to me. ...scary

~where do they make balloons?~
-lamia