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| flowergirl 13 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseso so funny i could not stop laughing |
| too-much-romance 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseIf this is your first, then it's amazingly cute! And some points in there ARE funny. 8D But the way you make Neji just admit jealousy...eh, not really working for it. You should probably just say concerned, like: I am not jealous. I am not jealous. I'm...concerned for my teammate. If she gets married, then that'll mean I can't- we can't train as long as before. And then he'll nod to himself triumphantly. (Or just me, because I have a thing for nodding like Sasuke and Neji. *sweatdrop*) It's a good thing what you did there with the Author's Note. That was humor. A guy marrying a weapons specialist…how interesting. A guy not a ninja marrying a weapons specialist…How stupid. That right there was amusing. “Ladies first.” “Sadly, there is none in our presence.” That was pure genius. TENSAI! Tenten is making fun of Neji's feminine hair (and the way he puts his hand on his hips like girls do. I EVEN DO THAT!) while Neji is making fun of HER tomboyish nature, and saying it in a very smart, obnoxious, Neji-ish way. EXCELLENT! This is great for your first! SPREAD THE NEJITEN LOVE! YEAH! WOOT! WHEN IN DOUBT, PINKY OUT, AND NEJITEN WILL GUIDE YOUR HEART! |
| HJWG 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseSome constructive criticism: the author note's have to go. |
| tHe DeViLs SpAwN 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseyeah |
| issoooo0oooosickofbullshit1... 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseawkoibito that's an adoriblle name |
| BitterLife 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuselol! so many author's note's...actually some strange way i find them funnier...i was laughing at what you said rather than the story, strange isn't it...lol :) |
| Holiday Open 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute!! ^^ |
| Yadda Blah 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseOMFG! They squealed? Truley sadist, third def. Meep! |
| TheEndlessSnow 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abusei just love lee and Gai but the story was sweet i loved it |
| little wolf blossom 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseIt was alright, but your A/N's annoyed me to no end. Try typing them all at the end of the story, just do what you did with the (1). It would have worked fine. |
| Kuzosama 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAww... That last part was so sweet! Fluff~! |
| Lahz 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseXD Ok, you know what, you deserve a moofin -throws moofins with kunais embeded in them at her reletives- BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH hey, do you like chocolate?! Some people don't like chocolate and it kinda freaks me out. I mean, WHAT KINDA PERSON DUN LIKE CHACLATE?! AIIAIAIAIAIAIIAIAIAAIIAIA boom chuga chuga VRE -snap- |
| crazy 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abusecute! ^_^ |
| neko-leaf 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abusecool XD |
| shikamaru-kun 2005-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was the first one u ever wrote are u serious ? that was good !! *shocked* i can be a little sadistic myself sometimes *evil laugh* that was good i enjoyed it |