Oh my god! I couldn't breath when i read this. only started liking the bill couple of weeks ago. So glad i did. I love Smithy and this story. Keep it up:)

Wow! That was amazing. It made me cry, just a little, but I did. Well done.

thats really good you captured how he would feel that it is gabriel that saved him and what could have been going through his head well done.

This is one of the best Smithy-centred fics I've ever read. Well done!

Gabriel saved Smiffy

this is an excellent job. well done. but please more... more ...MORE. lol please do a next chapter i really like where this one could lead.

loadsa love
leanne!x

Aww, so cute! My poor baby! That was really good! I think Smithy centred fics. Good job!

That is very Smithy. I thought it was really good, you got into the character, I could actually hear him saying those things in his head, it made sense.