That was so true, so touching and very well written. I've read some more of your Saiyuki stories, and I have to say, I like them very very much. Keep up the good work! :D

Ahh, loved it quite intensely.

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Cute, bittersweet and poingent.

More, please.

You write such vivid and telling metaphors.

I like how you compare the psychological issues of each charactors to physical wounds--captures them perfectly.

Short but sweet; it still got the point across easily. A very unique take on the relationships between the Sanzo-ikkou... Metaphors are fun! Great job, keep writing. ^_^

This was a novel and intriguing take on their relationship(s). Insightful metaphors, smooth style. Good work, thanks for an enjoyable read!

A short but good one!