This looks interesting, keep it up!

AWW please hurry and update!!

I really like this. I knew I liked it from the moment Mimic said her name. Most people would have really stupid names, but that was cool and you show creativity.

This is an interesting story so far. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, so nice job proof-reading! The scene with Violet and Mimic in Ch. 2 happened very abruptly - you might consider adding a few more descriptive words/sentences to make it easier to visualize. The patty cake thing was also stuck me as a bit... weird. (If they're going to play a hand game, at least make it something more modern! It also seems like a contrived way to introduce that Matty is something other than normal. But that's just my opinion.) I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter, though. Nice beginning.

confusin

Haha, YOU'RE BACK!
So, I've never seen the Incredibles, so I can't actually READ you're story, but I can at least review for no reason! Haha, I love having fun... anyway, talk to you later!

hmm... kewl, but wouldn Bomb Voyage, be like, i donnu, dead?

YAY FOR VOICE CRACKING!
The Incredibles is just awesome, and so are you. So yay, it all fits!
And he sounds just like me. I finished one of my summer reading books the night before school. And I didn't finish the book about the snow dogs at all, and passed the test anyway...ANYway...

Welton Academy, hello...Yes he is, hold on...Mr. Nolan, it's for you. It's God. He says we should have girls at Welton.

:D LATER!

oh, how cute is that, you wrote an Incredibles fic?