Thus far a very good story. I like the way you detail everything out.

I almost didn't read this when I saw it going towards an Ultimicia/greiver rinoa/squall ending. Never saw this one coming. But I honestly think that it makes sense, and it is bittersweet at its best. Very unique!

I thought you did a great job with this story i loved it enough to stay up late just so i could read more of it. The story was really orignal. and if they did make something like VI-2 i hope it would be off this story. Very good story

I read this a few months ago on RPG Classics, and I noticed you were on , so I decided to send you a review.

Grevier Chronicles was simply amazing work. A very dark fanfic but it managed to stay within the boundries of the FFVI universe. I thought the scenes with Alicia's experiments on Squall were captivating. The ending, which I thought would go the direction of Rinoa = Ultimecia, was completely original and almost shocking. I never expected it to go into that direction.

I'm glad I took the time to read this work... 10/10

Very great story, and after having read it I find that I keep expecting the other authors to reference GF's in the fashion you did, but alas, no. I also read the sequel on though Diablos's comment about Griever mystified me, as I had already read this ending and if there were a time for his/their words to come true I thought it would have be then... Still, major kudos!

Well, now, what can I possibly say except...

JOB WELL DONE!

Very impressive, writing such a powerful and moving story that is at once amusing, angst-y and romantic. Although I was personally expecting that the traitor in Garden would have turned out to be that one student who Zell recommended instead of just some random character...

Also, very creative in including Raine in the picture. She certainly made a difference in the whole scheme of things, didn't she?

I personally believe that this story should be made into a movie or something...it certainly would help to flesh out any long-held feelings that remained after the end of FF8, as well as provide a credible explanation for the purpose of the Griever ring. Now, the only question becomes: "Will I find another story here on this site that will explain Griever as well as this one has done?"

Congratulations once again! :D

Read this along time ago and really liked it

That was an awesome story. ♥

I just started back in on the game -- I'm up to the Propagators and hopefully I'll manage to beat it -this- time -- and so went on a search for some good fanfiction to read. This definitely fit the bill.

I'm off to check out the rest of your 'fics -- and any other FFVI I can find. Thank you so much for the spectacular read!

Wow, that was one incredible story. The plot was really original.. and it was beautifully written. :) The end made me a little sad though.. sad and happy. Sure they're together.. and they survived, but they're not humans anymore! Gah, this whole concept is hard to deal with. Anyways, awesome story!

Wow -- what a great Prologue! It delivers the right amount of tension, drama, and fear, giving those of us who have faced Ultimecia in the final battle cause to tremble all over again. I think even those who never played FFVI would be impressed with your descriptions. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of it goes.
~Cel

I've been reading this on your website so I can experience it in all its unedited glory, but I thought I'd review here. This fic is beautiful so far; extremely well-written, and your Rinoa isn't the whiny, clingy bimbo so many others make her out to be. Your darker take on Garden procedures is excellent, as well; I found the children-with-GF's concept to be unnerving. I can't wait to find the time to read this further.

If you think that every shred of happiness as seen in the FFVI game was false, then this is the story for you.

Thusfar, I'm finding that this story has some interesting conspirecies going on, and these are worth reading. However, I kinda like the love shown in the game...

I think this is my third time reading this fic. I really liked it alot. But it seemed to have such a sad ending though. I'm not sure why, but it did.

Wow. Endings ALWAYS make me sad because people die. But this ending...wow. I'm happy and sad. This was very good...thank you.

this was SUCH an awesome story!