 yoyoki 2005-04-25 . chapter 1 i love your story its wonderful.^u^
did sakura die?i'm slow on these sorry.keep writing, don't give off writing stories.i know they'll be wonderful |
 NailedTips 2005-04-17 . chapter 1 You don't need to post notices because it's super clear! i liked it very much, and how japanese words were executed. don't care that much if you aren't grammar-wise, what's important is that you deliver lines so calm and really affectionating. how come you've written such sad stories like this? awesome. really awesome! i have to admit i cried a lot, when after Li said he had touched that part wherein the 'April 1' thing was written. Saku's really gone... (i sadly can't believe uttering it to myself.. geez) if it in others they find it confusing, well to me it gave my heart a break. haha, you've made them think hard somehow! great!
You fooled me! Li was REALLY talking to no one, i suppose! (smiles) but then this was the nicest touchy tearful fics i've read. i'll catch up on you, remember that! write more! |
 Carmen 2005-04-04 . chapter 2 Oh my gosh! I did cry! It was so beautiful and sad. Awesome story! I love it! Bye |
 UreyEz13 2005-04-04 . chapter 1LOVE IT!! it's very unique and dramatic! I'll be watching out for you! |
 xSkull.CanDiiee.Bitesx 2005-04-04 . chapter 2oh... O.O I get it... i think... *sweatdrop* |
 AnonymousT 2005-04-03 . chapter 1Sigh.
Your story is so peaceful...But I didn't quite understand a few parts. Did Sakura die or something? Or did Syaoran forget about Sakura? Or vice versa? You might need to read over this story because I found a few grammatical errors.
However, I love your writing. It's so calming and I feel very content with it. The way you describe is perfect, but you might need to describe some more details.
Another thing was odd...Why would Sakura walk with a complete stranger? /hmm
Haha, yeah, I play RO as well. I'm on the servers, MobRO and Q-RO. What a coincidence. /heh
Great storyline by the way! /no1
-AnonymousT |
 tHouGht buBbLes 2005-04-03 . chapter 1 hey there! in case you're confused... Sakura there died five years ago. The lines in italicized after the girl's words was Sakura herself speaking, sort of 'flashbacks' in Syaoran's part. You know... he seems had forgotten everything all about her... that's it! happy reading... and hope you won't get mad at me! (sighs) |
 ink.bird 2005-04-02 . chapter 1Wow... that was AMAZING!!... I think I get it... but I'm not sure. Anyways, it's totally awesome and I LOVE IT! |
 LittleHeartTurtle 2005-04-02 . chapter 1CUTE! but really confusing but i could understand in a way. |
 itsdeleted 2005-04-01 . chapter 1WOW that was KOOL I loved it thank you for creating such a story it made my day THANK YOU |
 Kazumi Tachikawa 2005-04-01 . chapter 1at first I was confused... thinking that sakura instantly I dunno became a kid... then it all came to view... a very heartfelt touching story...short, sweet, simple... keep up the good work! |
 Mikoto Katia 2005-04-01 . chapter 1Wow...that was poignant, amazing, wonderful, touching, majestic.
You are *so* going on my favourite author's. |
 -Tidibeer07- 2005-04-01 . chapter 1 good... galing... sad nga lng sa part ni sakura pero un ng un heehehehhe maganda... |