Pretty interesting.

I would like to see more of this :)

This is a great fic and I cant wait to see what happens next

It is really good. I hope you up date soon.

Hello, Cool I like the changes that you made.

Okay... WoW... need more now.

Cool! Please more. Its abit hard for me (I'm from Germany) to read, but I understand it and its great!

Just like the original story, it was very good. I do think that there are a few more grammar problems that could be fixed, to be super nitpicky.

Some places have tons of commas when it's not really necessary: ie. "He stared at the man, and it was like looking in a mirror, not a normal everyday mirror, but a fun house mirror, that instead of making him fatter or taller, it made him look older."

You could probably just say: "He stared at the man and it was like looking in a mirror. Not a normal everyday mirror, but a fun house mirror that made him look older instead of fatter or taller."

Also, it could just be my computer but there are a lot of random things underlined in this story. If it's not just my awful computer, the underlines aren't really necessary. 'Ford' for example, can really just be written normally. Like I said before, it might just be me.