Reviews for Silent Hill: Amour

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wrath 2005-07-05 ch 2,	abuseyou do have an incredibly intelegent writting style. i shall be looking foward to reading this story imensly. one thing that stands out is the depth of your simile when talking about the church, almost mesmirising the reader much as the(what appears to be a trther short lived) protagonist. also, the descriptions are another strong point. the lenghts you went to for that scene really brought it...alive.
Joseph-ChesCa-the-Damned 2005-06-23 ch 18,	abuseI like where this is going. Perhaps the "wielder" resides in the tower? It sounds like you are setting up for a good boss character.
AedianGrendle 2005-06-23 ch 18,	abuseI'm curious as to whether or not you read a lot of Stephen King becuase you work resembles his very much. This chapter had a great sense of pace, building up suspense in a simple but immensely effective way! I've truly enjoyed your stories even if I haven't always had time to review them. Trust me, I'll get better on that.
Saddened Soul 2005-06-23 ch 18,	abuse... ... ... YOU LIED TO US!! YOU SAID IT WOULD BE IN A WEEK! YOU &^%#@#$%^&*! I'm just joking about that, by the way... This... was a strange chapter... Whatever the wielder of the knives is, Alex just walked into his trap. Poor, poor, Alex... Jessica probably isn't even there... Well, at least he has the radio; now he'll know monsters are about to surprise attack him! ~@_@~
Joseph-ChesCa-the-Damned 2005-06-22 ch 17,	abuseI haven't played it, but I believe that tower is from SH4, correct? If so, I trust there will be a special appearance from Walter, perhaps? I look forward to where this is going.
Saddened Soul 2005-06-22 ch 17,	abuseA place where children were imprisoned... A place where children were tortured... The tower that ascends into Heaven, while it's contents descend into Hell... So... We'll be seeing the Otherwordly part of the tower, I hope; it was only Walter's twisted view of it that was in the game. Actually, it's my favorite stage. Well, I'll let you be now. Until next week. ~@_@~
Saddened Soul 2005-06-02 ch 16,	abuseWell, this is a little over five minutes, but it works out all right. I found this chapter to be intriguing; it leaves you to ponder if this a memory of Alex and it actually happened, or something else... You don't need to try and answer that; I'll just wait for more chapters to become available. Anyway, keep writing.
Joseph-ChesCa-the-Damned 2005-06-01 ch 14,	abuseA little confusing at first, but then the supernatural stuff kicked in and it became sensible again +). Keep it up.
Saddened Soul 2005-06-01 ch 15,	abuseDOUBLE UPDATE! YAY! Okay, sorry about that. I am most definitely certain you described the Water Prison tower in this chapter; I guess it's going to have signifigance with the overall plot of the story? You're sub- titles are magnificent!... Well, I guess anyone could come up with them, but still... While this chapter didn't delve any deeper into the plot, I liked it anyway; cheers.
Saddened Soul 2005-06-01 ch 14,	abuseWoo hoo, you updated! A very nice improvement to a slightly dull day. Have I told you that you describe things well? I could see Alex, his settings, and his turmoil as clear as a summer day. I believe the cult isn't involved; no, it must be the darkness of the town toying around with poor, poor Alex. Anyway, great chapter... I suppose you already realized I thought that, though?
wrath 2005-05-22 ch 1,	abusewhat can i say? as openings go, that one really was something else and just from reading it, i think this is going to be something special indeed. i'm looking foward to reading the rest of this.
Joseph-ChesCa-the-Damned 2005-05-17 ch 13,	abusekeep up the work. Is the scene where Alex is falling supposed to be a transition into the hell side? The only part I didn't understand was what was going on with the tree, but no matter. P.S. His girlfriend must have been something to take his mind off that fall. ;)
Saddened Soul 2005-05-17 ch 13,	abuseOoh... suspense! Or, the cult of Silent Hill is still active... Or, Alex is just crazy and heading for the woods... Well, in any case, there are many more possibilities, and whether or not Alex can handle them or not... Good chapter, nonetheless.
Joseph-ChesCa-the-Damned 2005-05-11 ch 12,	abuseThis was really good, but the story drags a little bit. But the plot is going along really well. Just speed the text up a bit.
Saddened Soul 2005-05-11 ch 12,	abuseHow very unfortunate for Clive and Alex; seems they'll be having a harder time escaping. As for the prison, could it be the tower? If so, wouldn't have Clive commented on it when they passed by? Well, whatever, guess we'll just have to wait until the next chapter.

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