Touching... A brilliant piece. Nicely done.

Aw, very cute , love it. I hope to see more work like yours.

thats depressing.

A sad story indeed. I think I almost cried. Short, but it was well written.

very moving, well done.

beautiful, simply beautiful (wipes away a tear) I wouldn't change a single thing. Well except a spelling mistake here or there, but who cares when its as well written as this.

Yes...an angsty piece. Well written.