Great story! It's really good!

Wow. Just wow. this is great. A wonderful look at the emotions of Brotherhood. McKay is real, and powerful, but I knew you could do him well already. Your characterization of Allina is what really makes a difference. She's strong and determined, but she does care for Rodney. This brought out some new ideas about this episode for me. Bravo.

*sniff*

excellent fic! poor Rodney!