AW! So cute! Uriko's stubborn! I might write a story about those 2 also! In fact...*scribbles up some cruddy story*

It's good that you thought of Kenji's care for Uriko and vise versa, and i'm kinda feeling bad about the story of BR3. KLU rules!

I love cliffhangers sometimes because it keeps you coming back for more, anyways well done!

Um. . . cliffhanger? Definitely!

I hate cliffhangers, even good ones, so please continue. I can't see much wrong with this fic. The story is excellent, use of vocabulary superb, and the structure of the story is nicely put together. Please continue.

Great job Christi, FANTASTIC!

Another great fic by the our (I assume so) favorite author.

U know that I think u should con. the story!

CONTINUE! Please? o.o

Write more soon! This is really good! Two questins: When did br3 come out and what is Keniko? E-mail me if ya can its . -Blitz

Christi has such a beautiful way with words! She also does really cool fics, and this one was no exception. It was great for a first BR game based fic. Descriptions of the scenery really help set the cold & dark mood of the fic. Of course the descriptions of our two favorite characters was outstanding as usual! It also wouldn't be complete without a tender moment between the two. I don't know much about the characters in BR3, so this would be a great way for me to learn. I'd love to see this fic continued! Don't you just love her new BR slogan. I was there when she came up with it, I feel soooo special!_ I hope to see more of this fic. Great one Christi!

That was great Christi! huggs continue it, cuz if ya don't i'll be buggin' you for months _ heheh

Hehehehehe... CONTINUE IT! I COMMAND YOU! _ Okay, okay, I need to calm down... _ 1) "Light clinks were heard as black tabi walked upon the serene sidewalk, careful not to bring much attention. Glancing up, narrowed brown eyes flickered at the sight of the weakly twinkling stars in the sky, providing faint light in the otherwise shadowy night. Large forest green leaves bristled from the strong current of the wind, fighting to stand still and remain unwavering. The breeze flew by the figure, dancing around the muscular form, softly coming in contact with exposed skin." Awsome discription! I can almost picture it! _ 2) "She let out a soft sigh and stepped back from his touch, her slender legs shivering as the dark blue shorts encircling them offered a fragile barrier to the cold night air. Her arms dangled freely by her sides, the long white strip of material covering over her front brushing lightly against her fingertips as they swayed in the breeze. One of her hands was tucked behind her back, holding onto a strap that was attached to another object." Some more totally awsome description here! _ 3)"'Then what is your excuse…? I mean, how come you can… risk yourself for a loved one, but I can't do the same?'" I know how Uriko feels... I tell the same thing to the jerk and his chick gf at school (ya know, the junior who's first chair bass at school and his senior gf) I totally can empathize with her... 4) "His lips near his ear, she inquired,..." Can ya tell what I'm thinking here? _ Okay, this is all I'm doing... It's getting pretty to be a pretty good length...

Very nice! I liked the way you left it open ended... I hope the game itself does pair Uriko and Kenji like this. As usual, very nice work with the characters... Keniko forever!

Great for a first try! I liked the enteraction and emotion between Kenji and Uriko. Nice to see that you didn't alter completly from your other fics. I like the way you write that way since you make them so alive. I hope you continue it on. It's not bad for first either, Keep up the great work. Bye