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| Liliath 2006-10-23 ch 19, | abuseeven though its finished, I must say; I absolutely love this story 8D; |
| FantasySci5 2006-03-30 ch 19, | abuseWOW! That was WONDERFUL! And I know I always say that, but I MEAN it! Loved Rev and Harper friendship. |
| Jeannie 2005-06-09 ch 19, anon. | abuseBravo! |
| Narc0tiq 2005-04-21 ch 19, | abuseThat was wonderful! Great work! I loved the story! I'm running out of exclamation points! I'll have to go back to periods! :) Nice job! |
| ChicaFrom3 2005-04-20 ch 18, | abuseSorry for the delay in reviewing, Jipster, but I'm really loving this! So glad Beka warned Rev away from hurting Harper... *g* Looking forward to the conclusion! |
| Vermilion Angel 2005-04-20 ch 17, | abuseReally cool story, V.Tense :D Good stuff. |
| Narc0tiq 2005-04-19 ch 17, | abuseOh my... I'm getting worried. Update soon, please! Thank you! |
| Echo24 2005-04-19 ch 15, | abuseWooh! I managed to catch up! And what an interesting catch up it was... If Rev is hiding from the Yobs, isn't it going to be a bit hard for our guys to find him? At least Harper's remembering what really happened to set Beka straight now, that had me worried for a bit! |
| LittleRedhead 2005-04-17 ch 15, | abuseWhew! I'm glad Harper remembered and was able to convince the others that Rev didn't attack him again. I hope they find Rev in time. |
| benesound 2005-04-16 ch 14, anon. | abuseI just wanted to say, that I've enjoyed reading your story so far, and am anxious to read how things will turn out. |
| parisindy 2005-04-15 ch 13, anon. | abuseO i like the changes :-D + With a start he felt himself being carried, and it had been the bumpy ride that had stirred him back to consciousness. Immediately he struggled, and felt those carrying him put him down with haste. “Harper?” Beka’s concerned voice spoke quickly. + Man i love the bit! i re read it more then once :-D the conversation between beka and dylan is great to...well done!! |
| Annibal 2005-04-14 ch 12, | abuseJipster! I had me a case of Jipsteritis, so I looked you up here and found this AMAZING story! Egads, you write so well! I want to read more! |
| newbie 2005-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne word - fantastic! I sincerely hope that you write more. You have a great talent. Thanks for sharing. |
| Narc0tiq 2005-04-14 ch 12, | abuseWow, that was wonderful! Will there be more? (Though I can't see what more there could be...) |
| Narc0tiq 2005-04-14 ch 11, | abuseOoh, evil cliffhanger... Thank God you update quickly, or I'd be chewing my nails raw... Is there more yet? How about now? More? Seriously, I can't wait to see what happens. |