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Sarcastic Realist
2006-01-04
ch 7,
abuseYAY! I loved it!

Shay
Sqetch
2005-07-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseBah.I'm sorry,but being the stickler for Indian culture that I am, aren't Bug's folks from South India?I notice dthe parent's names are North-Eastern.But other than that, you focused very well on the medical aspects,and this is the best Bug-Fic I've read for a long while.Kudos! ^^

Love & Anarchy,
Sqetch
linaerys
2005-05-10
ch 7,
abuseThis is very sweet. I like the fact that Lily has to do a lot of the work--I have a feeling she'd have to trip Bug to the ground to make something happen.

I also like that you worked in Bug's parents and the posibility of an arranged marriage--very realistic.
Nimmireth
2005-04-24
ch 7,
abuse*APPLAUDS* Brilliant! I love it! SO totally cute! Aw!
MissDanielle
2005-04-07
ch 7,
abuseWow, that was wonderful. A lot of fanfic doesn't deal with the whole medical ascpect of the show, jsut beacuse peolple don't know what they are talking about. You handled the professional parts of this perfectly. You've obviously done your research and I respect that determinaton. But on top of that you write each of the character extrodinarily well. So many times you read stories and you cringe when a charater does or says somthing so competely unlike them. There was absolutely no cringe for me here. I enjoyed how this story played out jsut like an episode of the show would. This would make an awsome episode. I've never been much for Bug and Lilly getting together, but for seven chapters at least, you made me a believer. This is one of the best peices I've read in a really long time. Great job. Keep up the good work!
carla
2005-04-06
ch 7, anon.
abusedo u know, i have read a lot of fanfic, and honestly? this is the best i have ever come across. It would actually be the perfect episode. you have included all of my favourite parts of CJ: crime, medical stuff, and romance. esp. between Bug and Lily. There is only one thing i can think of. perhaps there could have been a teeny bit of flirtation btwn jordan and woody (not for them to end up together, but just enough to give a hint.)

other than that, this rocks!
missiemeghan
2005-04-03
ch 7, anon.
abuseWhat a great story! First of all, I love a Bug- centered story and a Bug/Lily story is even better. Second, this was a wonderful mix of relationship and case, that is much like the show.
You did a wonderful job of capturing each character. I also love that you featured Bug's parents, because I have been waiting for them to turn up on the show. Wonderful Job!
Sarah32924
2005-04-03
ch 7,
abuseAww! I loved this fic!! Great job! I have been searching for a great Bug/Lily fic for the longest time, and I've found it! Again, great job!
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