That sounds a lot like something every one of them would do. You've really managed to capture all their characters well in such a short story. Kudos for making that happen.

Brilliant. I'm a HUGE fan of your works on , even though you don't finish most of them ::Sniffz::. Thats okay! I think you're brilliant, and you've influenced alot of my work, aswell.

So, keep posting more, I don't care if you finish it or not, cuz either way you're awesome.

I'm not sure if I liked it, which is because I am one of the biggest Harry, Ron, Hermione bashers on the planet so if they are happy I'm not and I need Ginny in a story for it to be really good so eh? I like the way it was written though. I like how you really aren't sure about what is going on until your read a bit. Yeppers, nice job.

The Darkness is Calling
~~Michelle Marie Maire

I like this... :). So, why did you never continue "The Blood Of A Virgin"? It was my favorite story out of all that I have read, and I was so disappointed to not be able to read more :(