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| A. Nothing 2006-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis needed to be written and you wrote it. Perfect Characterization and what not. The only down side was Chester, but we all hate Chester, and Chuck and Cheese and Chad, or what ever. Perfecto Sweet Read... |
| Damned 2005-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, your plot needs work, as does your grammar. Some of your jokes are immature. THis is not a flame, I just dont know how to tell you these things. You have a nice use of adjectives, continue that. And please dont say goody-goody again. |
| addy 2005-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseso far i like it. keep up the good work and submit then next chapter |
| newportbabe44 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this was great. My favorite line: |
| keeponwritin 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I don't know why I enjoyed this so much. It just seemed so random and beautiful at times. Absolutely adore the Spinner/Jay interaction, and Chester cracks me up, and this whole thing was like, brilliant-licious. (Yeah, I'm tired. In other words, muy excelente.) |
| fran 2005-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood except one thing...Emma and the rest of the gang (Manny, JT, Toby...etc) are now in grade 10 according to the show and Spinner and the rest of the gang (ie Paige, Jimmy, Hazel, Craig...etc) are in grade 11... |
| grumpybear62684 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseGREAT GREAT GREAT!! Post more ASAP!! |
| DarkPrincessE 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm a sucker for all things Emma/Jay, so this sucked me in. Loved the Spinner/Jay interactions. They sounded true to the show. I wish this scenerio would have happened on the show. |
| alldressedupnowheretogo 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseoh my god. im practically falling off my chair from laughing. i dont know if this isnt supposed to be a funny story, but i found it hilarious. I liked how you used different names for chester and his brothers, and how you did the dufus thing with spin and jay. damn. this is going on my favorite stories list. i cannot stop laughing. write more like this again. |
| WritingIsMyDream 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusenice. I like it. |
| degrassicouples93 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good start. Please continue. |
| KT the Shimmer Skank 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseLove love love it. It's 7:30 in the morning and I've gone all night without sleep, so bear with me if this isn't coherent. This was a delicious treat. The Spinner/Jay dialogue was genius, candy on my tongue. The Jay-ness was muchos entertaining, which is saying something, because I hate Jay. The whole thing had such a fantastic humorous quality to it (Sir Spins-A-lot, the thing with the namecalling, and C-words, to name a few favorite things). And I'm a sucker for a good dose of Spinner, especially when it involves touches of Spanny. Is this a one-shot? Probably, but I didn't check. Again with the tiredness. You should do more with Spinner and Jay, because this was masterful. Going on the faves list. Rock on. |
| thengrl13 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusekeep going |