This is good. Catch ya on the flip side.

aww the ending's sad... i love that last paragraph! its funny but emotional at the same time... well done ficcie, i hope you write more HG ones eventually, if not soon :)

really good ending, you should do more higher grounds when you get the chance to there really good

as usual, i'm not completely sure of what's going on, but i'm really into this story... update soon!

Good but a little confusing, I wasn't sure who Michelle was at first and who's this Rosemary cick and where's Shelbey?

i dont think it's bad, ithink it's interesting! though i couldn't picture scott actually hitting her, the story seems like its going to be a good one... lol i was expecting soemthing completely different but i like this scenario much better, less heartache for scott ;) update soon! and more than just a 2-chap! lol