great story

This is a really great piece! I love how Monica, Andrew, Raphael, and Tess were able to save Katie and Erin. This is a sweet story, and a great addition to the TBAA fandom. Keep up the great work - I can't wait to see what else you've written!

This was a really good story, and really well written! Keep writing!

-LadyTiger06

I enjoyed that. You write well. You are very talented

Nice

this was a very good story can't wait to here the rest!