Yay! Very awsome story! I love it! XD

Just a suggestion for a sequal: a yellow god. Yes, there was going to be a yellow god in the game and you should have a plot in which the 2 have to stop the yellow god. Yeah.

I assume that Miss Sterling is you? Heh, good first chapter. I'll fave it so I can read it when I have more time...

Interesting. I just started replaying the game and decided to look at some fics for it.

Sweet! I like it a lot!

hi i'm not trying to be rude but the worm is Chatur' gha and the angle Xel' lotath and the dome is Ulyaoth. thanks!

Hey, it's me, the weirdo that found you on AIM, "phspopular2002"

Really good, and how Danielle, your original character fits into it all... Great stuff. Really exciting! I'm a bit anxious to read on what happens next.

I don't mind if ya took a look on my Final Fantasy stories and RahXephon fic...one's finished, the rest is on hold besides the poems.

Good job on the rewrite. Just reading this makes me miss our RP's. :P We had fun. Though Max seems to have developped a bit of a temper since he died... Who knows. The asylum could've turned him more in that direction I suppose. You see, THIS is why I say you're good at character developpement. :P Anyways, I'm just blabbering like usual. Good job, I hope to see more.

It seems like every time I read your fic, I seem to understand more about it. It could be that it's easier to read on here... Well anyways. Great chapter. This was always one of my favourites on the game itself, and your written version clearly shows that. Oh, and that crack about me being a great writer? Read your own sometime and you'll see what great writing is. :P And seriously, how could I not like it?

Still good as ever, Storm. I've always been a fan of your writing. But you already know that. You're great with description. Keep it up.