Not bad, short but not bad. The only thing i HAVE to make comment on is that this is NOT and epilogue. In your summary thats what you called this. an epilogue is what comes after a story, the ending, the P.S. the by and by. This is a prelogue the pre-fix pre meaning before so prelogue come before a story and epilogues come after...just for future knowledge

i will soon enough. i forgot that it doesnt show a chapter title when its only one. That's just the epilogue so the chapters will be longer.

Pretty short...You should add what Katie Gidley looks like and all that good stuff...Make the next chapter longer, please!

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