Oh gosh, was Miroku/Koharu's car the one involved in Sango's accident? That would be really dramatic and ironic.

I'm totally loving this. Please do continue! And soon too!

Oh wow!

Was it Sango that Miroku and Koharu hit?

Because that would be very very ironic, not to mention interesting!

So that's how it started off eh? Interesting...can't wait till the next chapter! Plz update! It's an awesome story!

i love it but miroku and koharu is just.. i dunno something i don't like about her, eh maybe im just hoping that miroku starts to like sango. anywho i love this! its good plz update soon i want to know whats going to happen next.

Oh, wow!

An update!

I don't really know what to say.

I'm getting the impression that Koharu is supposed to be a liked character in this story, but I still don't like her very much . . . She's too . . . Err, girly, I guess.

Still, I love Miroku and Sango's relationship. I'm a total sucker for love/hate.

I hope that your updating game goes well, and it won't be a year and a few months until you add another chapter. ^^

I find myself thinking that I should like Koharu, but she's just too... sweet. I can't deal with that much sweetness.

this is awesome!

^^ Kip is happy. And inspired. Because all the Miroku/Koharu stuff has gotten to her and she needs to write Miroku/Sango to scrub it out of her brain. XD If we get lucky I will finish today, or at least sometime this week. We shall see. Anyway. I love it. Y'know, minus the M/K. Yeaah. Not quite shiny because of all that MK. But if we were looking for MK, it'd be shiny. Either way, it's good. Because it's one step closer to the M/S goodness. =D Love ya, May-May. ^^ I'm going to work on PI and talk to you on AIM now.

Wow. I am really really loving this so far.

I really like how you portrayed all the characters so far. I don't like Koharu much, but it gets kind of annoying when all writers portray her as an idiot.

The summary was really attention grabbing, and was very suited for this first chapter, which is definately one of the best I've seen =)

But oh my goodness! You haven't updated in nearly a year! Any chance that us readers will be seeing anything soon? :D

That was one of the best first chapters I've ever read. Really. The way it started out and just led up to what I'm sure is the major portion of the story was perfectly done. Lately all the stories I've read have been dull, and hard to understand. Your stories always seem to be this great balance of confusion and common sense, and in the end leave you thinking about it for a long time. I can tell this is going to be the beginning of a fantasic story! ^.^ I can't wait for new chapters!
Your writing is beautiful and well worth the wait! I think this story is going to be one of my new favorites.

Yay! A new story! Sorry it took me so long to figure out you had actually posted a new story. I'm a bit clueless in that department (when I say that I mean the brain department).
So, now's the time that I unload the usual crap on you: update soon and all that. Please. I'm so polite.
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Oh! Another luffly fic! Technically not a word but it is in my dictionary of words i've made up!=D I only use made up words, when real words won't suffice so it's a good thing, really. anyways me much likes this. I hope you can update it soon!

~Toodles!~

*taps foot impatiently* And?! lol, seriously, great start! I look forward to seeing what happens.

I'm really liking Miroku and the way you're writing him here. He seems so honest, at least with himself. I like the set up and look forward to reading more to see how it will all go.