 CriesofCapricorn 2005-04-09 . chapter 1Hey, Strange Bint. I LOVED this Spike/Illyria fic. Really did. Both Spike's and Illyria's speech patterns seemed right on! I loved their interaction. You made a few spelling errors with "Your" and "You're." Just remember "you're" is when you what to say "You are." Also, I think it's spelled Illyria and not Illiyria. But besides that, this was a really great fic. Nice work! |