Hey its Lady Shelly from gogaia. I like your story! Especailly the end! Keep writing!:) bybz

Hahahahahaha! You've got quite a talent for humour, I must say! I love Mummymon. He just cracks me up. Him and Archnemon (Arukenimon? How the hell do you spell that anyway?) and their FREAKIN' Jeep! IT'S A FREAKIN' JEEP! And the whole flipping the coin on who gets to slap Ken...I laughed out loud! I love it! Sophie

That was pretty funny. I like the way you kinda parodied some of the parts of the series, like Ken's line about how all the control spires seem to be getting closer together (hey, he's right!). And I just loved the part where Cody and Kari flipped a coin to see who got to slap Ken this time.

Hey. I like it.

Good fic. It's humorous, yet not so much as to be stupid. Your writing style is quite good and you use a variety of terms and phrases. Excellent work, i advise you keep writing.