Wow. Dude you captured the characters so well in this. I could hear them saying the lines in my head as I was reading it, some of it I even swear I saw it on the show (even though I know that's not possible). Just the clarity of your vision. This was terrific! And I love the song u used (I always have liked that one) which worked fairly well. Good work1 *claps*

*starts sobbing* that was... I love that song lol... God I thought it was great... If you aks me it flows over perfectly...

:S i cant critisize because I actually can't find anything to critisize about... I clearly loved it, even though i didn't know the entire story. Ride on!

I'm glad you posted it here too! It's a great story, Zarina! The song fits the story and I can see Charlie and Claire interacting that way.