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| LocoGreggo 2006-05-31 ch 20,  | abuseAw...sweetness...please update when you can. |
| applexbabe 2006-05-28 ch 20, | abuseVery sweet :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-28 ch 19, | abuseVery well done. |
| Lalenna 2006-05-28 ch 20, | abuseAw. Such a cutie chapter...about time too lol. Cant wait for more, loving this fic! -Lenna |
| applexbabe 2006-05-28 ch 18, | abuseHahaha, Beep? i can picture it. Nice bit of suspense at the end. I'm interested to see where the Steve story goes. I'm glad he didn't turn out to be a crackhead. His daughter's naming was a very nice touch. Well done, yet again :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 17, | abuseVery emotional, very well done. I loved Nick in this chapter, as well as the Sandle interaction. Naya's growing on me, too. |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 16, | abuseVery emtional, very tender. I hope Greg and Sara will be able to make things work. I have conflicting feelings about Sofia and whether I feel bad for her or not. It's yet to be determined. If I do, it's only a teensy bit for now. Well done :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 15, | abuseVery suspenseful, very dramatic. You write drama well. I thought it was a nice touch adding the "Please Lord keep us all safe" in there. For Sara to turn to God. I enjoyed the friend interaction between Sara and Nick, you write them well. Very good job overall :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 14, | abuseI liked Greg asking Nick for permission to propose. I wonder how it'll go when he finally tells Sara he knew about the baby before she told him... I wonder how the storyline with her bro will go... I hope Nicky gets some happiness :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 13, | abuseVery cute Naya and Nick :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 12, | abuseVery good Sara-Greg interaction. I wonder about the woman in the car ahead of Nick. And I've added this to my faves list :) |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 11, | abuseMaybe Sara can feed Sofia through the meat grinder. |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 10, | abuseGreg's turned into a bit of a dick. |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 9, | abuseO, very angry chapter. |
| applexbabe 2006-05-27 ch 8, | abuseI think Greggo and Sara should work one more case together. They're called to a remote location to find that somebody has shoved Sofia through a meat grinder and spread her around with a straw. I like the pregnancy plotline :) There's a *very* good chance that by the end of this story, it'll be added to my faves list. |