Hey!
I've read your story and I really liked it!
Good job!
But i think the last chapters were a bit depressing..with Ben being killed and all of that...How could you kill him? I liked him soo much...
But I think it's great, that Harry and Ginny are getting married again.
Great story!

awesome story.
really love it

Stopping after chapter one. Very loosely written, maybe a good idea, but the flow is non-existent, and I the conversation is incredibly choppy. If I had to guess I'd say you had trouble doing papers for English class in school, if you are out of school.

You need a good, good beta.

I changed my mind this is a good story, I will never read another Ginny/Draco or Hermione/Draco story's for think that it stupid. I realize that the only reason you paired Ginny with Draco was to plot to kill Harry's family, I am going put on my alert list but I have a feeling that you would never write another chapter again.It been over two years since you wrote your last chapter, Normal with that long of time away mean all unfinished story are abandon

This is a very good written, I would like to say that I think that this is a good story but that be a lie, I could say this is the hardest story I ever read. I normal stop reading when I see the author paired Ginny with her cousin Draco, reason I did not stop reading was I read this chapter first.

I really do think that your good writer that I could another story's you written, but I won't for I would be too scared that you pair Ginny with Draco again.

I know this story is 4 year old but I feel it never to late to read a story and make a review

why dont you like this story? it was intense, and its is definitely going m=in my Epic Stories c2!

AH!!WHAOAOAO! OMG! WO!

and Rosencrantz andGuildenstern? somebody likes hamlet lmfao

this story has been fantastic! i started it yesterday and have already finished it. i know you keep saying that your being series is better but i loved this one however, i may go and read that series now

Hiya! Very good story here--and it's really impressive to stick wiht it for so long. Congrats!


Okay, I know you wrote this ages ago, but I had a sincere question that's been driving me mad for almsot the entire story: What is with Biralin and the Landers?

Okay, I get that they're the evil guys now, but you don't just wake up and say "Let's go screw over the entire world"

They clearly aren't anti-muggle, if they have no qualms against stopping to pose as hot dog vendor for an unspecified period of time.

Nor does anyone seem to be getting / looking for power, which was another big selling point of Voldemort's.

They weren't pro-England murdering extremists if their headquarters were in America.

Pansy was quick and blase to deflect--she had no loyalty to any of their ideals, so I ask, what were their ideals?

In fact, Biralin and his followers turned out to be almost civil--except for the killing people thing, they were perfectly willing to NOT kill Preston in favor of dueling with Mad Eye and them, whereas it would have taken about a split second longer to blast Ben's head off and THEN duel Mad-Eye and them. They seem to be all bluff and theatrics.

Am I making sense? What was their rallying point? Why would anyone support them? Just to cause organized chaos?

If Biralin wants to rule the world, then why on earth was he supported rather than locked up in an asylum?

I kept expecting a plot twist in which we found out that Biralin wasn't evil at all, and Harry and co. would jump on the bandwagon and support him, just because there's got to be something he's trying to do, and we have nothing to show that it was evil.

Please please please reply--I really want to know.

I really liked this story! Lots, i'm going to check out the rest of your stories. Very good character development and plot line!

this story was awesome!! it just seemed really cool that he had kids and i love harry's attitude/character. sirius wasn't that bad either. the fic housed a lot of good ideas and for the most part, was well-written/editted. thanks for writing!!

“That’s what you think!” Tonks said loudly. “Stupefy!”
loved that XD

Also, the making fun of Harry as a lawyer was pretty good...

I've kind of been slogging through this, waiting for something good to happen, but... I dunno. Everyone's characteristics are really off--I hate both the Harry and Ginny in this story. They're extremely weak and shallow, as are the kids. I seriously wouldn't mind if someone killed them; I just have no emotional connection with them.

This review might seem overly harsh, and I do apologize for that. But 28 chapters, and I got maybe one Harry/Ginny scene and maybe a million Harry/What's-her-perfect-face-from-New-York scenes. It was fairly promising in the beginning, but seriously, the fic isn't doing anything for me.

I admire your persistence, but I think the characterization could use a lot of work.

Interesting, hope Ginny isn't hooked up with Malfoy.

gunny

Interesting start.

gunny