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Reviews for: We All Make Mistakes
Micuko
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
like it :))
Jane-Lily
2007-03-19 . chapter 1
I think Draco forgave Harry too quickly. No matter how much he loves Harry. Draco shouldn't have made it that easy for him. After all the heartbreak and grief he's caused Harry should have to work for it. (No matter how unintentional)

Nonetheless the idea is good and so is the writing.

Thanks for sharing!
I believe in you
2006-02-14 . chapter 1
Nice story.. Liked it!
GoethFisheth
2005-04-12 . chapter 1
good job for a first slash (not that i'm an expert or anything). i like the idea... BUT, just a pointer: Draco, though he's weak, he doesn't act like a girl (i mean, you didn't totally make him seem like a girl, but throwing himself into Harry's arms is... not masculine even if he is gay). but other than that, and the tips from the other reviewer, it was good. :) keep writing, please!
Lyonessheart
2005-04-05 . chapter 1
The storyidea is good but you rushed it and left a lot of things unexplained. If it was just a kiss why did Harry marry Ginny? How long between the encounter at the lake and the meeting? Why hasn't Draco said anything before, etc. You could makew this work but it needs definitly more work and revising.
Lifelike
2005-04-03 . chapter 1
Yay! =does happy dance= I loved it! WONDERFUL job with it! ^^

Summing it all up: AWESOME!

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