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Reviews for: Marchland
Arraya
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
these fics of yours are wonderful! I really haven't the right words to describe how great they really are.I Need a thesaurus, apparently. So, know they are way better than the words I use here in these reviews!
Lily Evanstar
2006-08-20 . chapter 1
Wonderful.
CaptainTish
2005-05-07 . chapter 1
You write Jack so well. You really ought to continue this series!
Neqs2
2005-04-29 . chapter 1
Damn! I can't understand how you succeed in packing such a punch in such short fics, but you leave me in awe. Please, please write more!
Shadow Phenix
2005-04-11 . chapter 1
I'm googly-eyed here.

"But he knew. She could not hope to believe that he didn’t, because—oh, God—that grin.
He unleashed the white and the gold like he would have a blistering broadside and there
was no mistaking the challenge or, indeed, which query it was he dared her to answer."
...holy Hell. Please tell me there's more to this! Cripes, what a great piece. And I loved that whole "blistering broadside thing." Perfect moment. Perfect way to end, but...wow do I want for more.

Thank you!
whosegotyou
2005-04-07 . chapter 1
Just found these stories and am loving them. I will add you to my author list so I can see when you update. But I do love your Captain Jack. You've nailed him perfectly.
Missy Mouse
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
I love the likening of Jack's grin to firing canon. Very good. lol.

Well, I'm always eager for more of your wondrous tales. Encore, if that's the right word!
nan
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
love it, love it! please tell me you will continue and not make it a "one shot". j/e have always been "meant to be", as they are so very much alike. why do others insist she be with will?
she would eat him alive.(lol) with jack she's met her match in every way!
Erinya
2005-04-03 . chapter 1
*channelling Breakfast Club* Answer the question, Lizzie!

I love you more and more with each installment. As always, I beg you to write more.

My favorite passage this time:

"She was all edges, on account of him,
prickly like needles and sharpened like swords... Things clung, in the sweltering heat: fabric of clothing, tendrils of hair and the most wanton of thoughts."
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