YES YES GOOD!! KEEP GOING!!

Aw :D kickass

:) makes me smile insesently...heh..inses"ent"ly...is that evenm a word? i tihnk it is...

oh ho ho! dude! keep going! :D
..wait..you've finished..well..whatever..its still awsome.

hee, YESH. you are awomse!

lol, hee hee hee, so cute.

SUSPENSE!

do they die? probably not, since the big splashy thing was probably somebody else jumping in to save them. cool! do more soon!

cute I like it
warm fuzzels!

this was really REALLY good! i like it! do more really soon!

Hehe, funny. I liked it, good job!