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| toothchick 2008-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseI love the uncertainty of both Gil & Sara. This line was so simple and yet so beautiful in its simplicity: ...And here he was, in her apartment, giving her flowers because her favorite color was purple. |
| nithe 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad that I decided to skip this story, and read the Brass one first, before coming back to this one. This will definately fuel my dreams as I slip off to slumberland where I can be Sara, and kick some sense into Grissom's brain. Lol...um...no, I haven't taken any medication today, why do you ask? Good job. |
| Quill-32 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute and realistic. I enjoyed it! |
| rockybudi 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseaw so cute :) |
| Noodlejelly 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely story, really really lovely. Enough angst to be realistic and enough fluff at the end to have me grinning stupidly. Excellent. |
| taramis 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseO, fiesty Sara! And Grissom sticks around to get it together! Very nice! :purs: |
| Abisian 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI like how you titled it Back PETALing like the petals of a flower ^_^ Impossibly cute story, as always. I liked the portrayal of Grissom here ... just so cute :) |
| Frumpy 2005-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story. Nice mix between angst and aw how romantic. I could really feel for Sara and her growing tired of Grissom's games finally - you captured her beautifully. Love your writing style. It just flows naturally. Keep up the great work! |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abusethat was really good! your writing is wonderful! |
| Ramsey 2005-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was an incredibly cute story =D I for one really enjoyed it. Well done ;) |
| Ramsey 2005-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was an incredibly cute story =D I for one really enjoyed it. Well done ;) |
| brainfear 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHoly shyte. Awesome awesome. |
| Teenwitch 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI read the Sofia/Grissom pairing, and for a second I was like 'oh my god, she's crossed over to the dark side!' But no, thank god you hadn't, because that was beautiful. You just... the little thoughts you had for Sara were so amusing, and this one in particular had me cacking myself: Who knew that Gil Grissom being nice would make her snap? Lol. This is going in my favourite stories. Cliches work, damit. If Grissom did anything this romantic on the show, I would be VERY happy. |
| Christiangirl 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story. It seems that Grissom and Sara have to have an Earth moving argument in order for them to get their feelings and emotions together. What a wonderful Grissom/Sara Romance story. God bless you, keep up the great work and we're looking for more from you. Sharon |
| jesus_freak 2005-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseno more ? oh poo |